What program are you using?

Also it's a bit too big, might want to reduce the size a little

pscs6 and i thought i set to be 400x150

400x150 is the limit for the dimension.
70kb is the limit for the file size.
The one that you have right now is at 143kb.

yes am working on that i think i had 9 frames maybe 5 would work alottle better

Make sure you check out the tutorials here (:
http://forums.d2jsp.org/topic.php?t=57874419&f=246

http://forums.d2jsp.org/topic.php?t=57277290&f=105
http://forums.d2jsp.org/topic.php?t=57400186&f=105
http://forums.d2jsp.org/topic.php?t=57514326&f=105
http://forums.d2jsp.org/topic.php?t=57634222&f=105
http://forums.d2jsp.org/topic.php?t=57843360&f=105
http://forums.d2jsp.org/topic.php?t=57980088&f=105

There are also a lot of resources of deviatart
http://www.deviantart.com/

Make a thread and post every tag you make so people can see your progression, make comments, give advice and hopefully you get a lot better

This

redid my sig

not sure how to match the font they used on the album tho

the font they used is actually genuine handwriting, not a font.
just read tutorials.
general pointer to stay away from typo as a whole, since it's one of the most complicated things to learn.

how could you tell?