Quote (ericswanson_19 @ 12 May 2017 13:45)
Very cool composition, style, and color palette. There are just a few things I'd change. The horizontal lines on the buildings that are implying roundness are inconsistent. Some are straight, some curve up, and some curve down. The most notable thing I would change is with the biggest tower. I would vertically flip the ring lines. The part of the building behind the largest bird has lines curving up, yet the building behind that has straight lines, even though it appears to be taller. The left part of the tower in front of the sun is curved down and the right part of the tower has straight lines. These would be easy fixes that would improve the perspective imo. Lastly, the only things not in alignment are the spaceships and the person/balcony, so I would give angle them at least a little. Looks great nonetheless.
Totally agree! Thats some good critique, ill pay attention more on it doing next work. There are more things than that, that could be done better, but yea. Thank you anyways.