Help With Some Grammer - Topic

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Oct 3 2019 05:04am

Hi,

I was wondering if the following underlined sentance is correct and if i could use another word for "date" on the end?
It kinda feels like, it's the wrong word to use.

If you would like to see the parties dat we are aware of, please look for a picture on the top of our page that says “Keep track of all latin parties on this post!” and click on “read more” or “lees verder” in order to see all upcoming parties in date order.

This post was edited by MyRealLife on Oct 3 2019 05:11am

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Oct 3 2019 12:39pm

Thanks to the following 2 people for the help.

#1: https://forums.d2jsp.org/user.php?i=1162246

#2: https://forums.d2jsp.org/user.php?i=281583

Got it solved, goodnight

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Oct 8 2019 06:04pm

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If you would like to see the parties that we are aware of, please look for a picture on the top of our page thatsays, “Keep track of all the latin parties on this post!” and then click on and “read more” or “lees verder,” in order to see all upcoming parties in eachdate order.

i added eveything underlined/bolded to form a proper and more understandable sentences, t4t.

This post was edited by D2Traveller on Oct 8 2019 06:05pm

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