Well thank you for your honest rating D_urRRR! This was her first time freestyling and she needs more practice and shakos! I will pass on your constructive criticism to her so she can improve in the future! :)
Well, I think D_urRRR is right here! She's just getting started with the freestyling but I have faith that she'll get better! :)
Lol my criticism is mostly mostly based on the fact I dont enjoy the genre.
Her posting of video of her actually investing and showing off her current skill level is where a proper criticism can follow.
Anybody could write a good lyric, but making it sound good is another.