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May 10 2012 02:20pm
Hey guys, I'd really appreciate it if you checked out this article I wrote. I work with as an internet marketer for 3D printing company, Kraftwurx, and I've been researching a few interesting applications over the past days. I think it's really interesting to see how this technology plays into the medical world. Well, here is a link to the article I wrote. I'd really appreciate the upvotes / likes and such! Tell me what you think and how it should improve.

http://www.stumbleupon.com/su/6F5iJ3/www.kraftwurx.com/blogs-3d-printing/item/256-laser-technology
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May 11 2012 07:29am
Keylogger is obvious.
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May 11 2012 09:33am
You're selling the technology more than you are explaining its applications, which defeats the purpose of it being an informative article.

Also, any opinions you have about the technology should be saved for the conclusion and not included in the tag lines for the images.

Example: "I think it’s pretty significant to watch how much the 3D printing industry will be affecting the medical world."

You should just explain what's happening in the image and its possible applications. Nothing more.

Imho

This post was edited by piddywiffle on May 11 2012 09:48am
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