Honest feedback:
The editing was bad. The intro was too long. Music was annoying but hey, just not my taste. The clips were honestly terrible and everyday gameplay.
The only clip that had potential was the sliding noscope if you could chain that into a feed.
Don't force yourself to put put new videos every weekend unless they're quality. People aren't going to sub to you for weekly mediocre (at best) videos. They want to see quality that brings them back everytime.
I'm not trying to put you down, just offering constructed feedback. I've done dual commentaries and featured in quite a few tages, so I'd say I at least have some experience.