Hey guys, I wanted to share this video I created recently. It's a Promo video for my friend Ron Smith and his business RSFitness. His business is centered around online training and helping anyone achieve their workout goal. Whatever that goal may entail.

This is my first attempt at actually creating a short story/montage compilation film such as this. So I appreciate all negative and positive feedback a like.

Thank you.

idk i dont think we wake up the same way

i normally think.. damn i need a new bed this one is really fcked up

or

god idk if i should look outside to see if my cars parked out their

o well better not look my drunk self would have parked on the other side of my appartment unit so i dont run in my my neighbours and have them think i drove home

o and your house looks clean

o yah im not gay but u should take ur shirt off

I will say me and you are pretty similar. Perhaps maybe not the drunk driving part but I do get up with a back ache sometimes! haha

Oh and that is his place. He keeps it tidy.

Will keep that in mind for future videos

Sounds like forced overly dramatic voice acting and effects. You're not Solid Snake or Morgan Freeman. Just talk normal.
I dont think anybody wants to see your car in the parking lot.

why dont u guys just make pornographic films?

just have some girls with yoga pants on in the gym and a guy is working out and they attack him and he rips off their yoga pants

u know the resr

needs more very fast dog running at incredible hihg speed https://forums.d2jsp.org/topic.php?t=74294676&f=27

This post was edited by MSX98 on Aug 15 2016 04:57pm

Mhm. I agree. I do not possess that type of voice. I thought if I enunciated better in general it would be good. Some words felt as if they were condensed or squished together. And perhaps the effects on the voice were also distasteful. I'll take note of that moving forward in any kind of narration I might do or help on.

I thought the car in the parking lot, driving off that is, was short enough to convey departure to the gym; however, not long enough to distract from the point and/or be useless b-roll.

Can that be my dog? plz.