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#21
May 18 2013 11:32pm
Quote (Lazy @ May 19 2013 12:31am)
Yeah, but* ur a nobody, so your vote, doesnt count.


He's better an you know it :baby:
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#22
May 18 2013 11:33pm
Quote (ZergBer @ May 18 2013 10:31pm)
He's got a pretty good point though

But the other guy's rhymes are thorough

XD



No one cares about him though, that's the difference.


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#23
May 18 2013 11:34pm
Quote (Lazy @ May 19 2013 12:33am)
No one cares about him though, that's the difference.


If you diss me in one of those cool rap posts you make will i at least be known? :(
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#24
May 18 2013 11:34pm
Quote (Vegito @ May 18 2013 10:32pm)
He's better an you know it  :baby:


Hes sucks more than a one year olds passafire.
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#25
May 18 2013 11:36pm
One of you should make a poem for me to recite or write to a girl, w/o all those mean things kekeke

Or at least teach me how ^^
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#26
May 18 2013 11:42pm
Quote (ZergBer @ May 18 2013 10:36pm)
One of you should make a poem for me to recite or write to a girl, w/o all  those mean things kekeke

Or at least teach me how ^^




when it comes to flowing, you wanna hit them hard...

so lets say you want to sting them harder than a bee..

you can start with the first word like....


Struck, this bitch is hard to fuck,

but either way, she gonna get stuck

by this big dick, thats a quack like a duck...



metaphors with rhymes is what people want to hear..



most of jsp think that as long as the last word of the sentence rhymes with what ever they say, is a good rhyme..


but thats why they are so easy to rape..

either way...


It comes from within,..


and most of the time, they just write shit, after they see what the OP wrote.


thinking like they have talent, and some rando, quotes what they say, cuz they dont like the person who created the topic...

it happens a lot..

but realize most of these kids are stupid and don't know shit...


thats why they are 2010 and above, who hate. lol.



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#27
May 18 2013 11:43pm
Quote (Lazy @ May 19 2013 12:19am)
The thing with you vs me, is that what you doing is a try, and what i do is free

But thats fine, keep in mind, i do this for fun, while you do this to try and get in my mind....

You try hard, hoping ill be like that is dope,

But you're wishing, like you're living off hope...

Ive been doing this, its nothing new....

If you hate it, thats not my fault, this is what i do..

In real life its a lot harder,

And in real life, im a lot smarter..

Thats why you come on jsp,

I wish it would piss me,

But when you wish free, you would know


Nothing you say will diss me

I just laugh with a smile

If you compare me to trying to flow,

You could see ive been doin this for a while...


Unlike you, I don't pretend to be the men inside my signature.

Wishing I could rap, with status of the picture.

I write my shit as R.A.P. which stands for rhyming angry poetry.

So like a bitchin woman in the kitchen you just cannot take the heat.

You're blowing trash on city streets.

I'm nastier than group sex sheets.

No matter what your level, I'm climbing ladders you're under my feet.

You're wishing that you could be me...

To vision this world as I see

Instead you act a rapper on a gaming site called jsp...

Just look where your career path leads..

A writer with writer's block disease

A cureless individual whose dead end will leave him on his knees.

Success will be your wet dream tease of dollar signs and nice car keys

Stop wasting time both of ours please and give it up this shit is ease...

Quote (ZergBer @ May 19 2013 12:31am)
He's got a pretty good point though

But the other guy's rhymes are thorough

XD


Lol I don't even rap. I am very educated in writing and poetry, though.

This post was edited by Archer on May 18 2013 11:48pm
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#28
May 18 2013 11:45pm
Quote (Archer @ May 19 2013 01:02am)
A modern Shakespeare has risen from a magma bath.


Have you made your purchase of "Sonnets in 09minor" yet?
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#29
May 18 2013 11:47pm
Quote (Lazy @ May 19 2013 12:42am)
when it comes to flowing, you wanna hit them hard...

so lets say you want to sting them harder than a bee..

you can start with the first word like....


Struck, this bitch is hard to fuck,

but either way, she gonna get stuck

by this big dick, thats a quack like a duck...



metaphors with rhymes is what people want to hear..



most of jsp think that as long as the last word of the sentence rhymes with what ever they say, is a good rhyme..


but thats why they are so easy to rape..

either way...


It comes from within,..


and most of the time, they just write shit, after they see what the OP wrote.


thinking like they have talent, and some rando, quotes what they say, cuz they dont like the person who created the topic...

it happens a lot..

but realize most of these kids are stupid and don't know shit...


thats why they are 2010 and above, who hate. lol.



;)


ew
plus it didnt have my name in it, so... 2/10

Quote (Archer @ May 19 2013 12:43am)
Unlike you, I don't pretend to be the men inside my signature.

Wishing I could rap, with status of the picture.

I write my shit as R.A.P. which stands for rhyming angry poetry.

So just like a bitchin woman in the kitchen you just cannot take the heat.

You're blowing trash on city streets.

I'm nastier than group sex sheets.

No matter what your level, I'm climbing ladders you're under my feet.

You're wishing that you could be me...

To vision this world as I see

Instead you act a rapper on a gaming site called jsp...

Just look where your career path leads..

A writer with writer's block disease

A cureless individual whose dead end will leave him on his knees.

Success will be your wet dream tease of dollar signs and nice car keys

Stop wasting time both of ours please and give it up this shit is ease...


:thumbsup:
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#30
May 18 2013 11:50pm
Quote (ZergBer @ May 19 2013 12:36am)
One of you should make a poem for me to recite or write to a girl, w/o all  those mean things kekeke

Or at least teach me how ^^


With a description of the girl, I can try something for you.
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