Quote (Surfpunk @ Jul 31 2016 12:20pm)
Not bad. The music was a decent choice, although I would have dropped the levels of that audio track at certain points (not just speaking parts, either). Lighting could have been better. But not a bad concept for a short, and it works fairly well in a 5-minute time frame. Too much longer than that would have gotten too repetitious. Your character seemed a bit robotic, though (although, I don't know if that was by design or not).
Well, seeing as how my character was basically a Sim, it was intentional. It was a difficult character to play because when I got the script, my two lines, my director said, "I want you to be like a sim, robotic but at the same time, dont give it away that its a game."
Okay.
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