yea ^^

Mente om man måtte høre hele digtet, hvis du var færdig.

Nuttet nok Boris, en rigtig sing along.

Det er hele mit digt

det er sgu meget nice

Mangler stadig hjælp

The street boys hiding in the hood,
feeling misunderstood in a world where a nigger
needs to pull the trigger, before people opens their eyes
& see their own lies.
It's the underground, they're just trying to survive,
for another round they might be alive,
life is more worth than to trash away,
rebirth, for another day


Nogen som kunne finde på mere?^^

The street boys hiding in the hood,
feeling misunderstood in a world where a nigger
needs to pull the trigger, before people opens(skal væk er bare open their eyes
& see their own lies.
It's the underground, they're just trying to survive,
for another round they might be alive, (going for another round, trying to stay alive)
life is more worth than to trash away, (life is worth more than to simply throw it away/life is precious don´t throw it away) - skal være: worth more than hvis du bruger det, såfremt det skal være grammatisk korrekt.
rebirth, for another day (live cautiosly to see yet another day)


få evt. lidt inspiration her: http://lyrics.filestube.com/l/life+is+worth+more+than

håber du kan bruge det til noget^^

TAK!

The street boys hiding in the hood,
feeling misunderstood, in a world where a nigga
needs to pull the trigger, before people open their eyes
& see their own lies.
It's the underground, they're just trying to survive,
going for another round, trying to stay alive
life is worth more than to trash away,
rebirth, yet another day.

See,
they live in blocks,
equipped with glocks,
raised in a ghetto,
wish they was in a meadow,
they ain't living,
please try to forgive them.


Hmm?

er du ikk den bedste i klassen seriøst ?
det lyder sygt det der.

Edit : men hvad betyder : meadow ?
har aldrig hørt det ord før.

This post was edited by TheStreetMan on Nov 17 2009 09:20pm

yo son du har stadig grammatiske fejl

The street boys hiding in the hood,
feeling misunderstood, in a world where a nigga
needs to pull the trigger, before people open their eyes
& see their own lies.
It's the underground, they're just trying to survive,
going for another round, trying to stay alive
life is worth more than to trash away, (man kan ikke sige trash away - så du må enten sige throw away eller ruin eller destroy eller waste / going to waste check kontekst se f.eks http://www.onlineordbog.dk/wordnet/da/cb/waste.php
rebirth, yet another day.

See,
they live in blocks,
equipped with glocks,
raised in a ghetto,
wish they was in a meadow, (they were on/in)
they ain't living,
please try to forgive them.






Hørt om at slå det op i en ordbog evt? Det betyder en eng common knowledge rly. Du er vel bare ikke så belæst, men det undrer mig at du ikke er stødt på det i engelsk, selv i folkeskolen.

This post was edited by ViperClaw on Nov 18 2009 04:17am