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‘’ BANG!’’
Jim woke up with a start, because he heard a noise from the living room. It sounded like someone was trying to kick his door up, or like a gun shooting at the window. He looked at his alarm clock. It was 3 am in the morning.
Jim was a little boy, only 9 years old, but already a clever one. He made exercises for ninth grade, like it was first grade exercises. But he had one weakness. He couldn’t resist the night, so he was scared every time he woke up in the night.
He took his clothes on, and walked slowly downstairs to the living room. He had his new electronic torch with him, which he just got in a birthday gift, holding it as he was holding a club, ready for knock down an eventually opponent. No one was in the living room, but his cat, Martin, which was sleeping at the ground. But then, as he was going back to his own room, he heard the wind blowing. Jim turned around, and then saw the window open. He went slowly against the window, scared just as he was going to his teacher for his marks. But then, just when he was about two meters from the window, he heard a big crash. The next he saw was a big open field, just like the battlefield in his computer game.
“ Argh! “ Jim shouted. “Who in the hell is touchi...ng…me?’’ Jim looked around, and saw something that looked like a troll.
“ Aah, you must be the new guy from Oversides! “ The troll said to Jim. “ I’m Barthan, and your name is?”
“ Ehm, my name is Jim, but what I’m doing here, and what is this place?”
“ You don’t know? You’ve been told as the best opponent against King Markech”
“ WHAT? Exactly what are you talking about?”
“ Oh. I see no one has told you that. Markech is an evil troll in our land, and he is going to take over our land. But we don’t want this to happen, because if he’s getting control over our land, the land is going so evil.” Barthan told him.
“ Aha? And you think I can do this………”
The next thing Jim saw was that he was laying in a room full of flowers.
“Sorry mate, but I had to this, otherwise you were going back to your country.” Barthan stood over him, and told it to him with a nice sound.
“Okay, okay…But what I’m gong to do?” Jim wondered.
“It’s pretty easy. Markech is very weak, but the only thing that keeps him alive, is the legendary gem that is securely hidden in living room. One thing is their weakness. In the night, between 3.00 and 3.10, there is a guard change. In those ten minutes, you can go down to the gem, and take it from the cage. But in the second you’re entering the room, the alarm will go off, and you’ll have about 50 seconds to get out of the room.”
“But why aren’t yourself going down to it?” Jim interrupted Barthan.
“Because the gem does two things. One thing is to get Markech more powers, but the other thing is that it hurt out minds when we get closer to it. Only peoples from other places can get close to it, without getting hurt of it. But let me continue please.
The plan is now, that we are ready to get you out from the room, when the alarm goes off. We’re waiting for you in his garden, hidden from all his guards, and when the alarm goes off, we’ll storm the building with all our weapons.” Barthan kept telling him how he should get in, until Jim could the whole thing in his head.
“So when we start entering at 3.00, I’m going to take the first door at left, then take the second door from right, and at last knock three times at the wall, one time at the brick five bricks from left, then two times at the brick five bricks up, and four bricks to the right. Then the wall will open, and then I will come to the room with the gem. As soon as I get into the room, I’m going to take the stone I have in my pocket, and throw it at the cage. I will take the gem, and run out to you guys in the garden.
Am I right?”
“Great Jim! Lets hope you can do this tonight. So, if you get some sleep, I’ll prepare the items for you” Barthan answered.
The clock was about 2.45, when Jim, Barthan and his friends went out to King Markech’s house. Jim was very scared, and his legs were shaking as Burger King would shake a milkshake. They arrived just as the tower clock indicated that it was 3 o’clock.
“Come on Jim. I know you can do it!” Barthan said to Jim.
“I hope so…”
And then Jim came in. He opened the first door with the first key he got, then the second door with the second key, and entered the room with the wall. But as he entered the room, he forgot the combination.
“Oh…Five bricks from right, and then five bricks up and three bricks to the right… or what?”
The combination didn’t work. Nothing moved, he just stood there as a completely idiot, trying to remembering the combination.
“Argh…… what was the combination? Was it two to right or five to right?”
Suddenly he remembered it. He took his hand up, and knocked the right combination.
The door opened, and entered at a big shiny room, with the gem in the middle.
As fast as he could, he threw the stone against the cage, and the alarm sound. He ran to the cage, took the gem and ran out again. He ran as fast as he could, as he never ran before, just ran and ran and ran…until.
He woke up again, looking at himself lying in his bed.
”Wasn’t this true or what?” he said to himself.
As he said that, he saw a paper falling down from the loft. On the paper stood there:
Dear Jim,
Thanks for the big help you did to us. It was much appreciated!
Barthan
Jim looked at himself.
“No. It was not a dream”
And he laughed.