of course i want updates!!!

Why Do People Treat me So?
I look left to right and i see foe and foe
No friends near, to help me through this
Only cliff from cliff , risk to risk
Life is short and not well lived
I dont understand how some can live with this shit
...

But then i met you and became stronger
and it made me want to make my life longer
You turned my world upside-down
then you reversed my sorrowful frown
You filled me with emotions unheard of to me
You made my eyes open so i could see,
You mean so much to me you wouldnt believe it,
I am telling you a lot i must admit,
that without you i would not have commit,
living feels great and its all thanks to you
So all i have to say is that,
I love you..

This post was edited by YellowBusRider on Dec 19 2006 01:32am

well.....and you're fast!!!

well that was the 1st poem i did and i didnt like it so i didnt post

She has writers block currently >.< lol i'm so annoyed i can only respond cuz it comes easier to me like that.. so im still waiting..

Well.. to keep you entertained.. i just thought of this off the top of my head.. i already showed her lol

love is an emotion one that you fulfill
when i think of you everything stands still
unthinkable ever hurting you
because three words explain it all..
I love you...

heheh nice
so edit instead of double posting, i dont think we want this topic closed

Okay i'll remember that.. new poem....



This world is hard to live in
so this is how i shall begin,

Few things matter in this world
Because emotions and thoughts are all thoroughly swirled
Something such as love seems so trivial
And to think i might have found it seems so unreal

You make my day brighter and my life more Grand
And to say the least im practically at your command
You make me so happy and i feel like i can fly
but if you are near me, you'd notice that i am real shy

This is driving me out of my mind
Perhaps are fates were intertwined
However it could be just coincidence
But i doubt it in this incidence

Your walk, your voice, your face, your body are all breathtaking
Watching you and knowing you arent mine sets my heart to aching
Together i believe we'd be happy as a pair
We'd last a long time perhaps forever all we need is the help of a prayer

If i asked you to go out with me
Maybe you might Disagree
but i hope it'd just be,
An answer that'd fill me with Glee...

So before i end this i just want a statement
perhaps even a small hint
Would you Go out with me?
I can only Wish You'd Agree...

This post was edited by YellowBusRider on Dec 19 2006 01:52am

woot a nice one again!!! heheh
dumdum- msn!

This post was edited by jmbjmbjmb on Dec 19 2006 02:03am

yeah its my favorite except yeah the fact that shes telling me she doesnt love me
and stufff.. yeah its a gg poem

mary should have called this guild "Spammers Corp"

anyway, too tired to read ur poems Yellow i'll do that later

updating :DumDum Fighter lvl 10 / 12 / soon