Those trees seem more than a bit wrong to me.
You really, ideally want to be using two guns, now a perfectly modded vorpal would probably be good enough, I doubt you'll get one of those anytime soon so you should be dual wielding.
You also might want to invest in AoR, it will really, really help you out. Ranged damage isn't too bad, but you'll need the regen in the mellee.
Vorpal slashers are better than vorpal rippers at the moment, they have lower reqs and higher damage when nanoed. They can both get 7 slots so dual wielding with good mods will take a considerable amount of willpower. Thorn bolters do have high rpm but their spread is horrible and they have low range (and 3 mod slots max). The unique ones are good though, especially the splash damage ones.
For leveling I liked using a shockshell (electrical and spectral splash) and a fire field gun in the first slot and dual shockshells in the second. I'm yet to see anything kill fellbores as quickly as dual shockshells.
I'd suggest a skill layout more like this.
http://hellgate.ingame.de/charplanner/guardian/?l=50&aa=0&a=00000000&s=a000010800070003300000041500Rest of the points can go where you like.
I'd also suggest reading everything on the official boards about gun guards.