Don't be lame

so get that call of duty game

This is not fine
please make a better rhyme
I'm tired of you guys slapping up this shit
Cause it's just got me at the end of my wit

I'll give you props for throwing out a starter
But for your future rhymes you better try a little harder

To weave a good rhyme in the speed of a flick,
You should know that practice is the only good trick
So I'm giving you a hand, and all I'm asking in return,
Is for you to try harder with your literary burns

For any readers out there this goes double for you,
You'd better produce some better stuff too

AND I KNOW what I said at the start of this thread,
That it doesn't even matter just as long it's a rhyme
But and take a moment so you can comprehend,
That we're expecting some much better lyrics this time

See all the pages on this talented thread?
Your best bet is sucking up to all the old-timers
So let me list a few off the top of my head
Cause these users are the superior rhymers:

Kaya, BG, Bear and Chasmes,
All of us will run this place our own ways
You can ask them, they'll back up what I'm saying,
fake jj, Firebat, your posts just aren't weighing

So watch out or recieve a verbal flaying
Cause this rhyming thread is only ours for the taking

This post was edited by Goukakyou on Jan 15 2010 08:15am

haha
i try to keep it real and simply,
a game like this will tempt me
i write rhymes anyone can relate to
not just ur average fucking forum jew (666-)
no need for jews or financial expansion
cuz i write my rhymes by CEEPEE in my mansion
hope this gets you off your feet and dancin'
kevis' rhymes and stylin'
tho all day hes been MW2 advertisin'

this only furthers proof of your multi lawl

None of you faggots can make a rhyme, spit a line
Gonna have to give yall a lesson on makin it fine

First you gotta stop with the bullshit
The shit on this thread makes me wanna hit a bitch, split a bitch
Commit murder with the lines i pitch

Then fix your fucked up style
Use vocabulary that will make you versatile
Let me read a spit that'll make my time worthwhile

If you're white don't act like you're black
Make your dumbass look whack
Put your game back on track
Get on the attack to succeed, never concede

If you're black
You're a piece of shit
i'll take your crack
Quit tryin' me you ain't legit
A mind is what you lack
Before you call me racist just know


You ain't ever gonna make it


/thread

LiL JJ
has no vertebrae
cuz lame
with no cod game
that bear needs to buy
or I might

i TOLD u nigga i can get you da reimbursement for postage cuz free 4 me... then u buy me da game and its GZ... haha

Google Spelling says: Error on this page. Spelling correction(S): Nigga Nigger



damn man shit knows whats up

If you rag on those who make rhymes,
You must learn how to keep time.
Rhythm is as important as the rhyme,
Otherwise you're just wasting time.

And before you start to yell and scream,
Please pick a single rhyming scheme.
Figure out a simple pattern,
Or complex like rings on Saturn.