I'm currently in the process of writing a novel, and this is just a little poem/'riddle' that may or may not make it into the final edition. Although my book is in the beginning stages it should be published within the next 3 years or so. Long time, although I'm in no hurry to finish. It is a fantasy novel, and will be of a series. I don't want to post a title as I don't hold copyrights to it at this time. Here it is, give me input if you so desire.


Beauty is a mask
That everyone shares
There is no great attraction
To the burden that we bare
There is no hidden value
To which we may attain
There is but a truth
One that is to ever remain

Give any positive/negative feedback you may have as I do like constructive criticism.