I know the beginning is a little scattered, and it's sort of blunt, but the kid who's gonna be singing it (i don't sing most of the time) wants "to the point" lyrics that are more "accessible" to kids, so here's what we have

200 years and the American Dream / is blood sweat and tears to grease the war machine / While Exxon-Mobile rapes the earth / the working class is sold at birth / We hail the aristocracy / We crucify our liberty / And only Jesus Christ can see / it's wrong to cure the HPV.


We can stop it
Now's the time to show this just won't stand


Don't buy into their bullshit /
Reject further hollow obedience /
Condemn greedy ambition /
Then declare ourselves autonomous /


Fueled by hate and ache for wealth / a lifeless state of mental health / Distrust in every enterprise / A world of cruel regretless lies / Justified with countless canons / Personified by sanctioned felons / With pretense of God’s support / At the expense of(finishing this line somehow)...


We can change it
Now's the time to end the fucking lies




It's a ska/hardcore song, so the gay rhyme scheme makes it easier for kids to learn it/sing along...

Or the gay rhyme scheme makes it easier to write.? ha.
I would lose the jesus christ line..because and stick to more topics that arn't so.....finite ? Like exonn mobile and that stuff. References are distinct to our time are generally better.

This post was edited by MW_Dream on Jun 24 2007 11:12pm

sweet

sux

i dont agree
the liric is good
h say sux becouse he dont share the same opinion

nice song m8
have a nice lyric