2001

A year without hurries
A year in fourth grade
When no one had worries
We sure had it made

With our sole concern
Were could we use slammers
The playtime we earn
Spent playin' with hammers

Gettin every pokemon card
On a 10 dollar income
Some said it was hard
To fetch such a sum

Cruisin' the block
In my mini courvette
Missin' a sock
Stung by a hornet

When no persons taunt
The sun in my face
The last thing I want
Is a lil' more space

We faced one complication
That entire year
When the steel twins deformation
Began to sear

What happen to these days
My very best friend
How do I rid of this haze
The time we can't mend

My favorite year of all
I was one happy son
Playin outside B-ball
In year Two thousand one

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This post was edited by Kamikizzle on Mar 23 2007 10:11pm

Wrote another one but i need a TITLE!! so help me out with a name for this one



What will I have to show when my life has ended
When my life is at a low, and anything but splendid
I go to school with saps, to get a fancy job
We throw up our caps, and begin to sob
But when we find no fun, in the midst of this fray
When the righteous deeds done are seen a-stray
In this place, when nice guys finish last
Morals we embrace thrown out so fast
Where am i going, I can only wonder
My wounds-- I'm sewing, my life in sunder
And when I pass, will anyone remember
Once I'm in brass-- a six feet under member
I can see the gates-ever so pearly
When Saint Peter states, "You're here- so early?!"
I say,"Phil V, reporting here"
"It saddens me", replys his leer
"To see you unflegded, and your life so right;
Let all those who dredged, know you put up a fight"
At this I pondered, if I'll be granted entry
Would back when I flaudered, be the blocking sentry
"Give me a sec", as he looks through his book
I feel like a spec, feeling ill from his look
"Ah here" quote the saint, a smile on his face
"You may enter the gate, all covered in lace."
And now I see, what life is for
To gain entry, to that gold shrouded floor

Big words, like it.

I rememberthose times being in highschool and feeling teenage angsts writing poetry.... Damn i was a Senior in 2001 make me feel old with these poems. The second one is very brooding.... cool stuff

the same,vouch for u here ^^

yea... i was like 13 in 2001 but i loved that year and made it more like 97'ish with pogs and pokemon and lil mini corvette thinggy; but for the sake of the poem i just made it 2001 (I'm a junior now). thanks guys, i really always wanted to write and kinda picked it up outa no where, thanks for the support. BUT I STILL NEED A TITLE FOR THE SEOND ONE!

This post was edited by Kamikizzle on Mar 28 2007 09:54pm

pretty good, i enjoyed the untitled one alot.

yea that one might just be my favorite one i've ever written so far