Quote (IIGonzoII @ Sep 20 2013 11:07pm)
I liked the second one more.
I suggest when you write just relax, jot random things down even if its off topic or doesn't blend.
Trying to contain a writing due to its topic will hinder it. These both felt caged in.
yah that is the problem, i start thinking of the poem and then i get 3-4 lines in and i just dont know what to do, have big poetry unit next semester in school so need some poems
