Quote (ChrisKz @ Aug 8 2013 01:04am)
I feel like it is just orderly, pretty words. The fact remains that you put words in there of a light feeling, heavy, morose, and plain contradiction. Especially I am the god who inhabits this land and the following Is there a god who can see us all, our down fall.
I dunno if you are trying to show a person in power who is hated by his nation, or just a dally daydream of some kid who is emo.
You could say a daydream which I will explain in a moment, as for the emo part that's not me lol; I am very happy with my life.
I was in Mcdonalds one morning before college, drinking my coffee and I blacked out for a few seconds, I saw what I perceived was the worlds destruction. When I came to I just started writing automatically. I have other things I have written as well; poetry, expressive thought, short stories ect.