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Jun 18 2013 11:54am
Ok so this could probably use some work, but if you sing it aloud with a slow tempo it works out fairly well.
I'll be the first to admit there are a few kinks.

Only positive comments please.. when it comes to music anything negative seriously hurts the artist (me in this case ), seeing as how music is just a window into someone's emotional processes (aka soul if you ask me)



for me to fall in love / i need a few things

when im down she kisses me,
when im gone she misses me,
and when i get angry / she grabs my wrists say'n please / she grabs my wrist say'n please

as i meet her eyes i-i cant breathe
a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity
reads my mind and loves what she sees
says she has tonight, tomorrow she leaves
i dont know why but i-i agree
in the morning she's gone, a message on the machine
in that sweet voice, "Call if you love me..."

for me to fall in love / i need a few things

when i hit the ground she-e lifts me
when im not around she'll wish for me
and when i get so mad..
she'll grab my wrist say'n please, grab my wrist say'n please

three days later i call her back
"i cant get you out of me head,
i love you and i want to see you again..."
lucky for me she said "we'll see"
and we met that next weekend
stayed up all night, became more than friends
as i opened my eyes she gave me surprise
whisper'n "i hope this never ends"

for me to fall in love / i need a few things

when im down she kisses me,
when im gone she misses me,
and when i get angry / she grabs my wrists say'n please / she grabs my wrist say'n please


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Jun 18 2013 12:12pm
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emo/gay


not quite, faggot
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