So, there was a bit of Pre-conversation, and it led up to my girlfriend writing me a poem. Tell me what you guys think?

Like luminous jewels they are held with nimble feet.
So attractive, so unbiquitous, so untamely sweet.
They are savage like animals, but as sensitive as a childs.
Its a mystery how they can be so indulgent yet so mild.
The eyes of a killer, they say to me straight,
but I am entranced by its story and fate.
With every wax and wane I see what is to be.
I see the future, as she is so blatently seeing me.
Nonetheless, words havent fallen from her lips just quite yet.
But one good stare defines how we met.
Her eyes are like diamonds, so pure, yet so strong.
Shes tough and is entirely wrong.
But isnt wrong right? I say in my head.
By the story told according to her green eyes.I know more now by what I have read.
Should I take the risk? Should I try to speak?
Because those eyes arent for the feeble and the weak.

She's got talent

Nothin super artsy or OMG but just a good read. props

Hey thanks. We're a young relationship, so there is still most of her lifetime to work on her poetry if she follows through with it, but thanks for the compliment.

in feet are held jewels so sweet
and yet so attractive

savagery with sense of child
to go to such lengths yet hold back

say it to me straight , says, the eyes of the killer
entranced, yes, story and fate

every wax and wane cause me to see what is to be, like sitting on top of a tall tree

no words to throw me into the midst of future, much like a abstract teacher
diamonds remind me of how we purified our strength
was she wrong or right, i know not, through other's books


:: so is this poem about a mother? teacher? female population? shoes of the world?

wedding rings? the lady future?

she sounds tite

yeah I couldnt tell either