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Jul 29 2011 12:23am
(Mother's Tears)
Crying with sorrow for your tears become wind, I was your pillar, your strength, your bloodborn of kin. Your children, Your worry, Your love lost in time. Our life is your legacy, Your words will become mine. Your Love cant be lost in time or in death. A mothers tears will always be known as her test. Your tears cannot comfort the pain you've put aside, It can only hurt you, for lies you've lived and died.


(My Hearts Lotus)
A mothers gift, A flowers born
An undying vow thats never 'sworn'
Petals swaying with mornings breath
To take adorning a lifes long test.
A giving life takes to seed
with trepid tenderness i must heed.
In gentle hands we must rest
for only she knows whats best.



(Ageless)
Passing cards fall from the deck,
To burn the soft flesh fom the neck.
Endless ageless free from the wreck
Surviving an agelss life failing trek.
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Jul 29 2011 12:32am
here are some more


(Vast)
Reaching branches for which we seek
Tidings carried beyond tongues speak
Lost time hounded by a hears beseech
Emotions ties we try to keep
Break upon a love so deep.

(Ivy)
Whose vines of life are sowed so sweet
in timeless love you will sleep
My love, My daughter, My one safe keep
For you, I live for you need not weep.

(simplistic)
simplistic emotions will sway the hearts oceans, leaving behind it the sands of devotion. Caressing its notion can only bring sweet potions. Love is meant to be magic, Like a lifetime once past it. love is not meant to mean anything for once you see past it, Love will show you that which is truly fantastic.


(Truly Be)
We share a bond which I'm fond of, In which no other can hold, there is a strength a feeling which keeps me a hold. The time that has past with the story that molds, where does this come from this thing which grows bold. I feel it's a lost sense a gut feeling and yet i feel tense. Only your fingers play in silence near my hearts last defense.. For this i give everything my words and my life, I know you cant break me for i break myself this night.(Published poem)

(Endless Emotions)
Eyes of an endless night, Clash into life with remorse for life, Stirring still waters that run deep within, Counting shadows that I've kept held in. Endless emotions that cry for breath,and sight. Crying alone in an endless night. Still waters can only run so deep, Our past is our own and for which we must keep. An Endless Emotion can only run so deep..


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Jul 29 2011 12:34am

(Heart Garden )
I once gave a pretty rose the light from my heart, Hoping that one day with her i might "part". She was nurtured from seed and gave the room that she heeded, And yet she broke from the garden i so desperately needed. Her thorns and her vines ripped threw my hearts carcus, but only to cleanse what lie away in its darkness.

(TruthBeyondLies)
Lies are but our looking glass to see forth past our truths,
Lies can only bring awareness out from our youth.
Lies last long beyond truth through our lives,
Truth can only be justified with lies from our crimes.
There ly a lie for which we must tend to,
And beyond that lie there must be truth that offends you.
'Once said' i was a liar and no truth that would come through,
Until one day i pulled the truth from beneath you.
Ive said that there are truth beyond lies and in faith you have listened,
But in that faith you have bleed truth from a "question".
The only lie in truth is itself, Beyond that is lie is just life left unfelt.


(This is your "calling")
Blue oceans and Blue skies War against Midnight "ties".
Our words come together like two airborn butterflys ,
We have lost and yet we have loved even those we have "gloved"
Dont let fear break the line For fear that line will yet break
You have yet to show me you have your heart in the "stake".
I have patience for your past but wont wait for its passing,
You have to give up that fear if you want my love everlasting.
There are my own walls i must climb and you have papers yet u must sign,
And in this poem i have drawn the line.


(No where)
There is no where i can see you, No where i can hear you. I only live to make you stronger,I wish you to live somber. I want you to see your Part. But i cannot hold you in my heart, I have let you live your life, even if your not my wife. You where wise to give me hope. So that one day i might cope. You where my teacher my lover, and even once my hearts cover. You have taught me the way of truth and of love, But lost to me as a flock lost its dove. You flew out of my life and yet with you, you take my strife. I am no where with out your love. No where but where i wanted.


(Release)
There is no release from the pain that's subsided, And in darkness alone will the light be confided. Pictures may age, and love may yet fade. But the life that i love grows strong with the day. Eddies in time may give new light to the morning. And still yet I find this life yet adorning. There's light on our paths that grow dim with our passing, like moths drawn to light like life light that's amassing. The days will come to pass and leave like a lapsing. But our love for each other will be everlasting.

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Aug 5 2011 02:25pm
Life is about learning,
new things and moving on,
I loved you once,
but now im evolving,
I am not sorry.

I, I do not care,
I control my life,
I learnt to evolve,
you should too,
the strong survive.

New strengths, alive,
new state of mind,
I must find new prey,
evoloution takes course,
the weak die.

Evolution by mrlupo7

This post was edited by mrlupo7 on Aug 5 2011 02:25pm
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Aug 5 2011 02:29pm
The ocean is big, full of creatures,
each is unique with similar features,
each swimming toward the surface,
closer, closer, closer,
swim faster, or drownd underwater.

Salty sea spray ascends, over this cliff,
greeting my feet, my body is stiff,
Just a step, just one inch,
closer, closer, closer,
two stepped in, one winner, one loser.

The sun is setting, over the water,
a time ripe for dieing, never better,
one step down, water now coming,
closer, closer, closer,
one hand reaches out, then another.

The ocean is big, full of creatures,
each is unique with similar features,
each swimming toward the surface,
closer, closer, closer,
swim faster, or drownd underwater.

Sun shines bright, heart begins to race,
she sits by me, one hand on my face,
my heart burning, warmth getting,
closer, closer, closer,
her hand grabs mine, then another.

Closer by mrlupo7. All of my poems are copywritten.
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