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Dec 5 2006 12:25am
This is the beginning to an Anime I'm in the progress of writing, feel free to read it as you wish. Please note that me posting this means that I trust you not to copy this and post it anywhere. Thank you.

A few things I will discuss before I start:

(Vykoru) "thanks for reading"

This is how I wrote this story, the name between ( and ) means the person talking [ (Vykoru) ]. "Whatever is inside here is what the character is saying at the time". [Whatever is inside here is what the character is thinking at the time].

The regular paragraphs are of course what the character is doing.

If you have further questions, please ask away.

This is chapter one.


(Azurskye) "That isn't a good idea to be doing that"
(Strange Man 1) "Who do you think you are? You want to join the fun?"
(Azurskye) "The only fun I'm going to have is watching you run away"
(Strange Man 2) "Is that so? Theres 3 of us, One of you."
(Azurskye) "Oh you plain on fighting that way? In that case you won't be running away from here, Sorry to say You'll be walking!"

Azurskye ran forward as the three surrounded him, laughing. He Swung his right elbow into the side of one guy, swinging his right foot up connecting it with another guys head. The third one ran up from behind and grabbing him as he slung him over his shoulders nearly the same second they connected.

(Strange Man 3) "He's good boss, what should we do?"
(Strange Man 1) "Come on, like you said it's 3 against one!"

With that said, (Strange Man 1) Jumped to his feet, made a fist and swung at Azurskye with full force. Azurskye Grabbed his arm before he came close to connection and led his knee into the guys Stomach. As he knelt over from the pain, Azurskye pulled his fist back and swung it connecting with him on his cheek bone as he went falling to the floor.

(Strange Man 2) "Screw this, we can't win I'm out of here!"
(Strange Man 3) "W-wait for me!!!"

The two ran off as the last one looked up at Azurskye with pain beaming from his eyes. He tried to stand to his feet, only to fall back over.

(Azurskye) "Well well, I got 2 running off and one crawling away. I knew this would be fun"
(Strange Man 1) "Don't think you're beating me that easy, them two were just pure cowards!"
(Azurskye) "Oh, really? Looks like you can't -"

(Strange Man 1) Rose to his feet and looked over at Azurskye, pulling a knife from a clip on his side of his pants.

(Azurskye) "Were going to play dirty, huh?"
(Strange Man 1) "I won't be the one crawling away, you'll be the one crawling into an ambulance!"
(Azurskye) "Is that so? I wouldn't like this fight to well if that happened"

(Strange Man 1) ran to towards Azurskye, while he just stood there and didn't move a muscle. As he got into striking distance (Strange Man 1) reached up his arm and slashed the knife towards Azurskye's direction. Azurskye Simple stepped left as he missed and went right passed him. Azurskye then lifted him his right left, driving it into his stomach, the knife went in the air as Azurskye grabbed it.

(Azurskye) "Once again you're on the floor, and now I got your little knife. It's a cute little toy I have to give you that."
(Strange Man 1) "You little punk! You'll pay for that!"
(Azurskye) "Punk? That would be trying to mug a helpless little girl, with 3 men."
(Strange Man 1) "Mind you're business fool!"

(Strange Man 1) rose to his feet yet agian, as Azurskye delivered the final blow hitting him in the nose as blood rushed out. He quickly collapsed to the floor, laying there not moving an muscle.

Azurskye walked towards a girl laying on the ground next to where they just fought. He bent down lifting her head up, which was laying flat against the sidewalk. She wasn't breathing. He quickly grabbed her and put her over her shoulders, running in the direction of the hospital. After covering a few blocks he flip someone hit in him the back, as he went falling to the floor.

(Azurskye) "What was that for?! That a way to treat you're savior?!"
(Girl) "Hmph.. I had everything under control! I didn't need no ones help!"
(Azurskye) "Uh.. If I remember correctly, you were -"
(Girl) "Well don't remember! I had everything under control!"
(Azurskye) "You're a strange one."
(Girl) "What? What did you just called me?!"

Azurskye turned his back and walk away, moments later to find someone handing onto his back. He grabbed her from the back, swinging her over his shoulders placing placing her on the floor in front of him.

(Azurskye) "Now listen, I just saved you from getting robbed and beat up, you don't even say thank you and you hit me making me fall to the floor. I look past that then you jump on me, what the hell is you're problem?"
(Girl) "I-I just.."
(Azurskye) "This is enough talking, I'm leaving."
(Girl) "Noo! Don't!"

Azursyke turned and started walking, only to find the girl following behind him. He walked a little quicker, only to find the girl walking quicker.

(Azurskye) "What the hell is you're problem?!"
(Girl) "I wanted to say thank you"
(Azurskye) "You're welcome, now can I go home?"
(Girl) "You don't want me to repay the favor?"
(Azurskye) "And how could you possibly do that?"
(Girl) "Follow you until I save you're life, silly."
(Azurskye) "Wow, no. You helped me enough, Thanks though."
(Girl) "Meanie!"
(Azurskye) "I'm not mean, I just saved you're life!"
(Girl) "Stop saying that, no you didn't!"

Azursyke started to run, to get away from this girl as the girl quickly ran behind him. He made it home, shut and locked the doors then made off to the kitchen.

(Mom) "Hey Azurskye, how was you're day?"
(Azurskye) "You don't want to know. I think I'm going to bed early"
(Mom) "Aww, okay sweetie."

Azurskye went off to his room to the girl sitting on his bed.

(Azurskye) "What are you doing!? How the hell did you get in here?"
(Girl) "Well you accidentally locked me out, so I thought you would want me to climb up through you're window."
(Azurskye) "It wasn't on accident."
(Girl) "You're so mean!"

Azurskye sat on the end of his bed looking at (Girl). She looked at him confused, then gave him a smile.

(Girl) "What is it?"
(Azurskye) "Even though you were just basically mugged, and beat up you still can go on happy."
(Girl) "Well you did save me."
(Azurskye) "Ah ha, now you're admitting it!"
(Girl) "Grr.. You really don't know how to treat a lady!"
(Azurskye) "Anyway I need to get to bed, I got things to do tomorrow."
(Girl) "Oh, who sleeps on the floor, me or you?"
(Azurskye) "What? You plan on staying here!?"
(Girl) "I can't save you if I'm at home silly."
(Azurskye) "No way am I letting a stranger sleep in my house!"

An hour later Azurskye is sleeping on the floor as (Girl) is sleeping in his bed.

(Azurskye) "Can't believe I'm sleeping on the floor in my own room"
(Girl) "Did you say something?"
(Azurskye) "No, no I didn't"

Azurskye woke up the next morning, to find (Girl) starring at him, sitting on the edge of the bed. He sat up and looked again, to find her in the same position.

(Girl) "Good morning! You're mom made eggs for breakfast. There yummy."
(Azurskye) "You talked to my mom?!"
(Girl) "Oh no, of course not silly."
(Azurskye) "How do you know she made eggs? And how do you know there good?!"
(Girl) "Well I kinda got hungry and ate yours."
(Azurskye) "WHAT!?"
(Girl) "Sorry."

Azurskye stood to his feet and walked out his room to the kitchen to find his mom sitting at the table reading a newspaper.

(Mom) "Did you like you're eggs sweetie?"
(Azurskye) "Yeah mom, they were .. Great"
(Mom) "Thats good, so any plans for today?"
(Azurskye) "Yeah I have to go meet some friends, I'm going to go get dressed then head out."
(Mom) "Okay sweetie, take care."

Azurskye walked back up stairs into his room to get a new pair of clothes.

(Girl) "Hey! I been thinking, and I don't know you're name."
(Azurskye) "Thats to bad."
(Girl) "Well, I'm Iyashi."
(Azurskye) "Thats good."
(Iyashi) "You're suppose to tell me you're name!"
(Azurskye) "Oh okay, In that case I'm Azurskye."
(Iyashi) "Azurskye, huh? Thats a weird name."
(Azurskye) "Thanks, I'm going to get dressed. Meet me out front"
(Iyashi) "How can I get down?"
(Azurskye) "The same way you came up."

Iyashi looked at the window and frowned, Azurskye walked over to his dresser and got a new change of clothes then walked to the entrance to the hallway.

(Azurskye) "Good luck"
(Iyashi) "Yeah, thanks. Meanie."
(Azurskye) "It was you're idea to come."

Azurskye walked into the bathroom to change his clothes, leaving his dirty ones behind he walked back out. As he walked down the stairs passing the kitchen, he yelled bye again to his mom before heading out the house.

When he reached the sidewalk he heard a loud yell then looked up, before he knew it he was laying on the ground with someone on top of him. He squirmed and screamed until finally getting to his feet.

(Azurskye) "What the hell is wrong with you?!"
(Iyashi) "You said to come out the window and I slipped, I'm sorry!"
(Azurskye) "You're sorry?! I save you, you almost kill me! This can't get no better."
(Iyashi) "You know what? I'm leaving. Bye."
(Azurskye) "You're leaving? I didn't expect that."
(Iyashi) "Of course I'm not leaving I just wanted to say it's okay, you're not mad."
(Azurskye) "Wow uh, It's okay I guess. I'm still alive?"
(Iyashi) "Good, lets keep moving on!"
(Azurskye) "Right.."

As they walked down the road, Azurskye noticed Iyashi was looking around the streets with a confused look on her face.

(Iyashi) "Azurskye, where we going?"
(Azurskye) "I got a letter in the mail about a week ago from some lady who works with the Sironz corporation."
(Iyashi) "Sironz corporation?"
(Azurskye) "The Sironz corporation is filled with scientists, but there study of field is unknown."
(Iyashi) "What do they want with you?"
(Azurskye) "I'm wondering the same thing, Iyashi."
As they walked in silence a few blocks down, Azurskye pointed to a tall single tower building, made of marble.

(Azurskye) "There it is, You want to come in or wait out here?"
(Iyashi) "I don't know, what should I do?"
(Azurskye) "It's up to you."
(Iyashi) "Okay, I came this far mind as well go all the way."
(Azurskye) "Right, lets go."

They walked to the front of the building and pushed the large double doors open. They walked into the room past the doors, and to the large desk in the center of the room.

(Desk Clerk) "Yes, how may I help you?"
(Azurskye) "I got a letter, telling me to meet Aliaon."
(Desk Clerk) "You're name please?"
(Azurskye) "Azurskye"
(Desk Clerk) "I see, please wait over in the waiting room while I contact Aliaon."

End of Chapter One.

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Dec 5 2006 12:43am
maybe you should post this in the anime section. maybe someone might like it wink.gif
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Dec 5 2006 09:26am
Thanks, Posted there, ignore this post people.
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