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Feb 8 2011 08:56pm
Basically I was a dumb ass and quiet possibly ruined the best thing that happened to me.
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If I ditched you, Why do I miss you?
The smell of your hair.. The taste of your lips, The feel of your hips

My jacket smells the same, as the day I picked you up
From the hell hole you were condemed in
I still have the pictures, the file with your name
The pictures of your sweets, and 'daddy' playing games

I threw it away, to lead a life destined to be empty and cold
A chance at true love, but my soul it seems, i've sold..

The fate I had was a wonderful life
But the card i've turned will leave me down a dangerous ride.

My clutch was you, Cayla and me
Now its alcohol and strange, believing the right one will be there on the next street
The streets that im touching brings nothing but bad luck
But at this point in time, i've decided to give up.

Until the next time we cross paths, im empty and cold
My heartless is crippled, and worthless ready to be sold.
Im trying to strangle out the pain, but it brings up the past
I want to start with the future, but that is involved with leaving the past.
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Feb 15 2011 07:21pm
its empowering, deep, and straight from the heart, nice work mate.
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Feb 16 2011 03:14pm
Great stuff , really from heart ! Continiue with writing poems
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Feb 21 2011 12:43pm
Thanks guys, I appreciate it.
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Mar 2 2011 01:11am
i think u might possibly have a ear for aesthetics but this is not poetry.
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