First draft of a free write I did. It should have been a troll post but became of its lengthy, only a few people bothered to read it. Thanks in advance.

Be honest - http://forums.d2jsp.org/topic.php?t=51774341&f=188

I read the first half just sounds like you're rambling bullshit

maybe you need a little bit more formatting, if people see a big pack of text, they wont read it

it makes it easier for the readers if u separate it in paragraphs....