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Nov 17 2006 09:46pm
A breath of melancholy made itself felt like a chill and sudden gust from some unknown sea and a tear like silver, glistened in the corner of her eye. Her face was as clear and definite as the glance of a child or the voice of a girl as she looked down upon the sleeping children, each like a corpse within his grave.

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This post was edited by Yelsew82 on Nov 17 2006 09:53pm
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Nov 18 2006 04:09pm
so is she about to kill them?
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Nov 18 2006 05:08pm
Dunno yet.. thinking about it.
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Dec 1 2006 07:48am
u wrote it?
its nice.. tongue.gif
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