just made it up



We all share neutrality,
When we hide our personality.
Let us become one,
Then thou sin will weigh a ton.

For all of those that decieve,
The end will defintly come.
For death we will recieve,
And then sin may be one some.




1/10 plz

This post was edited by og20 on Mar 11 2010 07:47pm

not bad, 7/10

3/10

i got a poem for you
im making it up now
theres a thorn in my shoe
i wana get it out..
but how?

<--that shits banana's

it would help if you spelt poetry right

to bad i could care less about poetry huh big guy? that was my first peom ever anyways ty and all of u for rating

Yeah... 4/10. Throwing the sense of wanting to be old literature like wasn't so good with your vocabulary choice. The words didn't flow well, and it kind of is generic. Sorry mate.