I'm going to add as frequently as possible. My first one was
written quite some time ago, but after that, I will try to add fresh
material whenever I can. Comment if you'd like, but try
to keep the spam to a minimum. I'd appreciate it, a lot.





Sweet Melodies

a bird outside my window sings the days
last sweet melody as the sun begins to set,
giving heed to a sea of fuschia painted
across the clouds. and as the moon bares its
face, the evening band of crickets plays
its sweet song, serenading the stars, so they'll
shine all the more brightly, lighting the
paths of those lost lovers, wandering alone,
roaming aimlessly in this world, searching
for their one true love.

not too bad. what are you trying to get across through this piece? btw, i like your name
i watched dead poets society over christmas break - i love that movie!

This post was edited by Rock3r08 on Jan 15 2010 11:50am

Thank you. One of my all-time favorite movies, of course.


And, unfortunately, I can't remember the point I was trying to make.
I wrote this ~2 years ago.. The way I see it, I was just inspired by what
I saw when looking out my bedroom window while I was sitting at my desk,
and once the first line was on paper, it all went from there.