Memories of the forgotten,
Feelings of the bold
Echoes of my wisdom,
Wisdom of the old
Hearts of the ancient,
Frozen by my cold
Memories of the forgotten,
broken from their mould...


any feedback would b appreciated, but if u like it or think it deserves a little something 4 the effort donate me a few fg

you made that up?

i think it's a pretty good little poem ;o

its ok, not fg worthy

thats a decent poem. if i had more fg i would donate, but the lottery is just too addicting and costly.

bout 300 bumps missed

Wow that is actualy very good

its nice i like the rhythm

i like poems that actually mean something.

thatīs just touching my dude

creative.. I would possibly donate if I had more fg :S