A couple with love

When you look at her, Think of the luck you have been given. Remember everything you’ve ever done, And how better it could have been with her. Cherise every moment. Because in time she’ll be gone and you’ll be heartbroken. With nobody to love but your family, They’ll guide you through relief, But not even there help will save you from the heart aches you’ll suffer. Fight through every arguement and never let jelously in the way of that precious love you two hold . Cherise it, Oh Cherise it.

That's like a paragraph than a poem..change the formatting.

I think when you say cherise, you mean cherish?

Edit; I agree with deadly sins, try centering it & take a new line for each part.

This post was edited by Phaladriel on Sep 9 2009 01:24pm