I wrote this poem, im 15, i wanna know how it is..rate is harshly
and truthfully pleaseeeee
A desolate battlefield,
A place once so full of life,
Is now left with blood soaked soils,
And lifeless bodies as far as the eye can see,
The only relief from the sorrow and pain,
Is a peaceful sunrise on the morn of each day,
So many years have passed,
But if you sit and listen,
You can still hear the crys and screams,
Of the wounded men that once lay,
On this desolate battlefield.
let me know pleaseeeee
im a beginner at writing poems this is my favorite, the words are different on the original but i cant find it >.< soo yeah. thanks for reading it