Winter:

i miss the winter snows and breeze
the coolness calmed my nerves with ease
the weather is to hot and dry
im to the point where i wanna cry

4/10

Just my personal preference on your topic of choice and type of poetry.

1/10

sorry..

It's not awful, but just as a tip, it should be "too hot" instead of "to hot."

gfg

3/10

6/10

not bad, especially for an alternatively coordinated 3rd gen poem. It's good, but could use some beef"ing" up. Go check out my poem a few threads down, tell me what you think.