Demented being fill the air
The one who love to bring a scare

They try to torment me
But they cant torment someone whos free

Sounds like you need to be slitting.

<.<

Life sucks, so take a razor to your wrist.

wtf dude?

If BFMV isn't gonna end your life, then maybe this poem should.

ALL CRITISISM REGARDING SELF HARM HAS BEEN REPORTED AND THE INDIVIDUALS MAY RECIEVE A WARN AND VACATION.
A poem for one is a mirror of there feelings, Telling them to cause self harm on themselves is both childish and wrong. If that person was to infact cause self harm imagine the guilt you would have?
So please when someone is writing a poem reflecting there feelings but still holding on, Don't discourage them, Help make them stronger.

To xWraithHordex:
I felt the pain the first three sentances delivered, But stating no matter what happends and how hard it gets being picked on you will always be in charge of your future. It's such a small message but so powerfull. Keep holding on

This post was edited by Belldandy on Jul 19 2009 06:21pm

I liked it, the overall feeling and deepness, but for some reason i'm not too fond of rhyming poetry anymore. I've seen it too much.