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Jun 15 2009 12:52pm
A Grain of Sand


A grain of sand falls
And life just slips away
A grain of sand falls
To start another day

A grain of sand falls
To tip the balance scale
A grain of sand falls
To keep you out of hell

A grain of sand falls
But what is a grain of sand
A grain of sand is everything you'll ever want
And the smallest pebble in your hand

So watch this grain of sand
As it falls through the hour glass
But don't you wait forever
On another grain to pass.





Not really looking for a flame fest but I know how some of you can't stop yourselves, so it's whatever.
Constructive criticism is more than welcome.
I have more, but I haven't written in a while so nothing new as fo now. Iif some of u like my writing then I will post more, but if not then I won't.
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Jun 25 2009 01:36am
My wife loves that stupid novelist.

Anyway it sounds like it did what it was supposed to do. It was a piece for self-realization.

Good on you.
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Jun 28 2009 01:18am
Sorry man seems to me like you watched Tomb Raider a few to many times but I am not a big fan of poetry anyhow so what do I know?
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