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May 8 2009 05:21pm
March the 4th

----Soft, Gently swaying.
The world brings us joy.
----I lay, beside my "girl",
You, with your "boy".

----The breeze, it rocks us gently.

----We sway back and forth, and back again.
Through time we go, through hardships and pain.

----I admire, your dazzling face.
Infectious, I sit in amaze.
----Your happiness seeps through me.
Your tears, consume me.

----I then find myself about you,
You for me, our souls intwined.

----Two lost loves, have found each other.
Too long has past, can't take another.
----Months go by,
----Dead end paths...
----I take a step back. I wait.

----With each coming month, with each passing day.
I start to analyze.
----On that special day,
I see your love, I see your soul.
----Just the, I come to realize.

----That on that... March the 4th... that amazing day.

----That we could be together
And go all the way.
----I will love you always,
And with all my heart i say...

--------I, Joshua Krewson
----Solemnly Vow,
--------Til Death do us part.
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May 8 2009 05:50pm
So i knew this girl, Stephanie, for 2 years. We chatted for a while in class, and every day we talked.
Along comes 8th to 9th grade graduation, and we slowly split apart.
High school consumes me, and i lose all track of her.
I take part in my own daily rituals, of getting in trouble, reaking havoc, and other nonsense.
While, she continually crosses path's with her to-be counterpart.

One day, i decide to confront her, and it was to ask her if her friend liked me.
She was almost devastated, yes, but allowed this crime against humanity to occur.

I went out with her friend, fully knowing that something must be "there" between us.

It yet, only brought me closer to Stephanie.

Day after day, rejection after excuse. I slowly detached from the hollow shell of a person "brittany" was...

Night after night, i would talk with brittany, but she bored me...So i would always three way call stephanie.

And along the re-occuring habit of brittany's, yet another failed attempt at a relationship. She would hang up.
Leaving me and stephanie to chat away.

Night after night, we stayed on the phone, talking away, talking, talking. We would chat until 2 a.m. or until the phone eventually died. It was amazing, we were so compatible. It was like we were meant truly for one another.

I then, went ahead and invited myself over to a party of Stephanies, for her 16th birthday party. I stayed the night in the other room, Myself, another friend of mine, and 16 other girls, that i knew not of, nor did i give the slightest bit of my being's attention to. my eye's were on stephanie.

Two days, i stayed with her, and three others, freshman in high school, we were just pissing time away, hanging out, and mesing around. But as the others left, and i came to be the only one left with Stephanie, the defining point was there.

I said, " to hell with her", and cleared all thought of brittany out of my mind. Stephanie, left to go use the bathroom. When she returned, i was standing there, more vulnerable than ever. I called out for her to come clsoer. Gave her a hug, and asked if she would go out with me sometime. Fully aware of the fact that she had been crushing on me since 8th grade, and i was too much of a pussy to ask....We finally were together.

Here, not some 26 months later. We are still dating, and in strong love.
I decided to write this poem today, in memorance of this day.
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May 27 2009 11:57pm
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May 28 2009 06:44am
Quote (hxc_master @ Wed, 27 May 2009, 23:57)
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hmmm. I like the thought behind the poem, but I'm not sure about the writing style itself.
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May 29 2009 12:00am
i dono dawg.. that was just 'all right' for me dawg
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May 31 2009 09:22pm
Quote (eriot @ Fri, 29 May 2009, 00:00)
i dono dawg.. that was just 'all right' for me dawg

I wrote it for her. Think of it from a lover's standpoint.

Quote (The_Disputatious_Linguist @ Thu, 28 May 2009, 06:44)
hmmm.  I like the thought behind the poem, but I'm not sure about the writing style itself.

Same response to you.
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Aug 24 2009 01:18pm
Well, she broke out in tears and gave me a huge hug. So, obviously she liked it.
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Nov 10 2009 05:45pm
:)
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