I just found this section on jsp so i thought i woud post something to get the feel for it.
don't really have a name for it, i wrote this a few years ago, just found it again.



They told me to be careful,
not to fall for you,
They warned me of false promises,
in all the things you do,
They told me of the heartache,
you gave the love before,
The told me of her tears,
as she walked out the door,
They said you were no good,
they said to watch my back,
How could I have known,
these feelings would attack,
But They don't know the you I do,
Can't feel these feelings in my soul,
And They don't understand why I can't let go,
or realize why I wish it wasn't so,
I'll never tell them why I care,
Or why I love you, I'll never dare

lesbo? anyway nice shitty cliche cry poem.

I really enjoyed it. I just went through a pretty tough break up so I understand, really hit home.

If I quote and credit you, do you care if I use this on my website?

It becomes a little inconsistent at the end with the beats, and there isn't a really set train of thoughts. It's a bit all over. There's a lot that you can work with here, and good material. Keep trying and writing.

it is a bit all over, but if they were to swap around some of the stanzas it could make more sense don't ya think?