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Apr 13 2009 07:35pm
Hur kan jag säga...

Hur kan jag säga om din röst är vacker.
Jag vet ju bara, att den genomtränger mig
och kommer mig att darra som ett löv
och trasar sönder mig och spränger mig.

Vad vet jag om din hud och dina lemmar.
Det bara skakar mig att de är dina,
så att för mig finns ingen sömn och vila,
tills de är mina.


Du är min renaste tröst,
du är mitt fastaste skydd,
du är det bästa jag har,
ty intet gör ont som du.

Nej, intet gör ont som du.
Du svider som is och eld,
du skär som ett stål min själ --
du är det bästa jag har.


English translation is

How can I tell if your voice is beautiful.
I only know, that it penetrates me
and makes me shake like a leaf
and tears me to shreds and splits me.

What do I know about your skin and limbs.
It makes me tremble that they are yours,
so for me there is no sleep or rest,
till they are mine


You are my purest comfort,
my most steadfast shelter,
you are the best I have,
for nothing hurts as much as you.

No, nothing hurts as you.
You ache like ice and fire,
you cut like steel my soul -
you are the best I have.

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Apr 13 2009 07:37pm
is that swedish?

I have no idea, but I gotta tell you, it doesn't sound that great in English (it's a bit cliche), though it might be beautiful in another language

This post was edited by Duress_x on Apr 13 2009 07:38pm
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Apr 13 2009 07:45pm
Quote (Duress_x @ Mon, Apr 13 2009, 09:37pm)
is that swedish?

I have no idea, but I gotta tell you, it doesn't sound that great in English (it's a bit cliche), though it might be beautiful in another language


Yes, it's Swedish.

I have to disagree. I think it's a beautiful poem, however I guess it depends on who's reading it and who it's meant for.
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Apr 13 2009 10:35pm
no, it doesn't matter who reads it, it's cliché
the meter of the first stanza was interesting though
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Apr 23 2009 10:15am
I don't understand that language.... o,o
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