Quote (eriot @ Sat, Mar 7 2009, 04:48am)
not bad description, ppl usually fail hard at fight sequence originality. a couple spots maybe slightly dense like "a spider web growth.... impact".
i'd fundamentally disagree with the temporal continuity of a dream
but i'd expect you to get an A for the assignment
and wats ur ava from thx
Huh?
I'll try to uhh... expand that line, I guess, or something. I can see how the phrasing is a little awkward.
As for the ava, I found the original .gif [colored and everything] on 4chan, dumbed it down to fit the restrictions, put it up. Don't know where the girl in it is from. :/