walked up to the bathroom. walked into the bathroom. confronted the urinal. with a laden cock. pissed into the urinal. relieved my savings account.
nononono. stop stop. this isnt a story.

ok. this is a piece to a hot girl that i dont know. too bad im too lazy to post my sketch of her.

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ray'd solar winds flow from thy crest
alighting warm greeds in my breast

this silence, inspired by your closed lips
you look down to earth as suns do glimpse

from apple flesh your face seems lain,
fallen Adam wudst glady so retaste

'tween cheek and chin guards your light hand
from what? delighted i'd understand

most startling, striking your wide eyes
global warmings cause a pithy prize

til i hear ur voice like chirping beer
too soon too near be my close prayer

j'adore toi mais sais pas pourquois
patin ma coeur jus'qu au'voir

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yes my grammar sux, etc.
plz lmk wat parts are stupid sounding cos i plan to present this girl w/ a work of admiration when the semester ends, ie in may. eEk

It was great until the chirping beer part.

thanx for input,
i guess mebe i shouldnt include myself in it..
at the time i was jus marveling at how melodic and songbird-like the sound of chirping beer is and thought to connect it w/ her
and the french is utterly childish but fun to say

you worry me

ur mother worries the tip of my cock gently with her teeth. umad?

like a cannon.

but i liked the first half
after the first 3 couples it kinda went downhill

lol elliot xD
good poem but it doesnt seem serious