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Dec 17 2008 07:25pm
Ahh, yes. I'm wondering on what do you guys think I should name my metaphor, simile, alliteration, and personification.


Love is like a Rock
By never moving on its own
It changes so much

Love is like pollution
It Gives
And Takes


For that simile, which could be classified I believe as a metaphor I would call it "Love is Emotionless"?
I'll be adding my others shortly! Also, criticism is fine, as long as it's not flaming. I'm actually somewhat liking this.


You can not help someone in need, when you yourself are the same, just as you can not tie shoes without laces.

This metaphor is meant to say giving is good, but if you need help also, you can not give. Just as if you don’t have shoes with laces, you can’t possibly tie them. This focuses around charity because of giving to others in need.


This post was edited by summi on Dec 17 2008 07:32pm
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Dec 20 2008 10:05pm
is this ur first time writing? the best thing you can do is to go and read poetry. cos the seriously worst thing you can ever do is say, "love is xxx"
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