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The walk of pain.

Death blooms before me
the skys open up and pour misery.
Slowly you drift away,
tears stream down my face,
screaming your name
crying in vain
clawing at the sky,
How could you leave?
Please just tell me why..
Standing in the rain,
calling out your name,
Screaming pleading begging bleeding,
You cant hear me, crying does nothing
There is nothing for me to find,
its time to Walk away...
Your just a shadow in my mind.


Crimson Angel

So i lie here,
waiting for death
Working my lungs..
to catch my breath
I see you now..
Blood in my eyes,
Broken and dazed.
My crimson angel
Shines through the haze
Maybe tonight i can drop my facade
Leave my mask, and bare this shame
Come to me angel, share this pain
So much to give, so little to gain.
Forgiveness perhaps?
Salvation is near..
Death is upon me, i have no fear.

Cry for me

Dispassionate and cold,
Empty and cruel..
I was the one you played like a fool.
If i cut you would you bleed?
Would you show me what i need?
Would you cry out in pain..
Or leave me to my bitter shame.
Why the betrayal why all the lies?
It could just be that your heart is ice..
Maybe you do feel.. How can i know?
Untill i can see your crimson blood flow.
Cry for me! Show me that you feel..
Lets those tears flow, i want this to be real.


A perfect moment.

I looked into your eyes, you looked into mine..
A moment so perfect, our hearts intertwine,
Wishing you were here,
Praying its not a lie..
For you to truly want me
Is my only real desire
One moment so perfect i can see myself with you..
An unbroken stream of confidence, tells me that its true.
Ill be your man, take my hand, and make this world our own..
Because without you by my side, ive never felt so alone.


Chains

Bitter bondage,
soul as hostage,
It was this way from the start
Broken dreams,
ragged screams
You never had a heart
Leave me here, walk away
Im tired of your lies
Ill end this life
free my soul
my body can feed the flies.

Uniformed madness

Ive always tried to be,
Some one i can never be
Hidden behind a mask of conformity,
But my black heart beats still
Waiting for the mask to slip
So i can get my fill..
And take a darker trip,
To walk in madness all alone.
I need music, violence is my tone.
Can hear my breath, on your cell phone?
A little terror, a little pain,
Let you cry, scream in vain.
Blood drips slowly as humanity returns.
Wash my crimson hands and fall back into normality,
While i pray for the day i can be released.

This post was edited by Plaguefear on Dec 15 2008 06:45am

0 comments, nice.

I feel like if no one comments, you'll really implement this, so I'll just say this.

When the eyes are closed, the world is dark.

If you're looking for answers, you need to have both eyes willingly open.

this wud fly as lyrics, but not as poetry
i really admire your courage in expressing your darker emotions.
im so scared someone will understand me that i have to try to confuse ppl
i get the sense that your writing is done when you feel your emotions flowing.
if you want to be a poet you are going to have to do a bit of work structuring a.. plot of sorts.
well i was gona say irony first. if a poem is one note all the way its sort of stale.
tell me something i dont know.
the best thing to do is just keep writing tho.
my fave was crimson angel. best metrical composition

I just write whats in my head, and yes eventually they will all be lyrics.

Lyrics are a form of poetry. :\

Brilliant work.
Feel free to bounce more lyrics past my pm box. I really enjoyed your writing style.

really great poem
pm me whenever you write a new one please

Damn...I like all this. Great stuff reminds me of stuff I try to write, but mine aren't nearly half as good and the are more about love and shit.

Good stuff.

Thanks guys.