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Oct 5 2008 04:12pm
a god in the hands of an angry sinner - iyrn iheif
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i dread the snow that i once loved
now i know how cold can feels
and snow sees how love can repeal
and coldly storms; begs its redress

across the field, hare flees its foes
extending steps with its vertebral column
he could snap with a crack or a blow
but snow too white, all lost of sight..

winter swept and fled as always
left me for dead or a thing to toy with,
whispering jaculations to the night.

hare paused as i came up to beg,
for food and sleep at a place of rest-
my injury's sake its heart embraced
and filled my cup with brimming love-
as sweetly as first bites of apples

but then it turned mundanely sour
my tongues such a brilliant coward
hare was hale fleeing winters tail
but now just hails in winter's cell

he went to hell at my command
i didnt mean to condemn his soul
nor cold expunge, from my crisp world
that once in bounty flourished forth

i fit the shard into the globe..
and go to hell too, for repose
or also to be idiot-like fair
and to finally put up all my snares

for love i can not help but bear
its return or at least a playful 'fair
now on a stage i lie visibly
for his eye to cast upon my flesh
my corpse proffered to burn afresh

my heart's empress i'd do not less
than this, a tentacled pretense
oh yes, i did much jest. i truly despise u.
u huddling mess. u cancer'd breast.
i'd kick you in the teeth for how
u fucked me innocently rough

but now i even miss utility's price
for much dearth is the wintry ice
this heat do be as poison'd as
juliet's deathly wailing loss

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note to reader
i stomped this out w/out editing, im posting to pose this question,
what do you perceive this poem to be about? im curious how it strikes ppl.
theres no right answer ofc
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Oct 8 2008 02:14am
Really lovely poem, if you composed it really then really you are a wonderful person with deep feelings for love. well this poem looks like the feelings of a person about love



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This post was edited by Lucysmith on Oct 8 2008 02:16am
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Oct 8 2008 03:15am
shouldn't it be an angry sinner in the hands of a god
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Oct 8 2008 12:08pm
i dont wana influence wat ppl say too much but the title is a misquotation of the famous sermon by jonathan edwards called sinners in the hands of an angry god
have u something to say about wat the poem means to u?
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Oct 9 2008 04:31pm
I translated this poem to be about a person who was decieved by their significant other. When realizing that person was decieved, (s)he murdered the other.

BTW, I want to know what YOU meant for this poem to be interupted as.
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Nov 10 2008 02:34pm
did you write it yourself? its awesome
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Nov 18 2008 01:47am
FREAKIN AWSOME
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