i can see what you see not,
vision milky then eyes rot,
when you turn they will be gone,
whispering they're hidden song,
then you see what cannot be,
shadows move where light should be,
out of darkness out of mind,
cast down into the halls of the blind

metrically very sound, like wat u did w/ last line
one concern i have is that you might'v spelt "they're" wrong in line 4
unless u were actually going for they are xd
i thinking making a little plot, however simple it is, wud be nice, or mebe i just wanted more in general. im guessing this is just a sampling
i dono why but i enjoyed you telling me im all these things i am not but find it cud be neat to be

1) Quoted from Cain in Diablo1.
2) You can't even spell the correct form of Their.
3) You suck at Poetry.

lol nice catch, I've been had

its d2 you fucking loser