Write a simple poem for the following picture - doesn't need to have more than ~12lines - simple english



Would be very thankful

theres a start... im currently at work lol so i cant work on the poem as much as i would like too..

The Land

this is the land we once knew, beautiful and clean
everything so untouched and wonderfully pristine

It sounds nice till now but let me give you a hint - The title of the picture is: After a Thunderstorm, so you might have to change the order

Thanks tho, if you finish it / correct it I'll send you the 10fg as promised.

A land blessed by god,
The most beautifull land ever thought of,
As he blesses us with rain,
Summer flowers bloom once again,
As I run in the mist,
It truly is something I will miss,
Maybe I will see the view once again,
As I wish I hold my mother hand,
Maybe one day I will fly,
Fly like the rain drops way up high.

This post was edited by Belldandy on Jun 23 2008 12:12pm

Don't ask people to do your homework for you.

Already done, thanks Belldandy, fg is commin'

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For? lol I think it was crap :X
It took 20 secs.
It was hard b/c I didnt know what style you wanted or the type of english to use :X
I'm not very good with pim poems :X but hey I gave it a decent shot

Thanks again



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