Girl Of Bones

Mind of holes, deluded in the mirror
Distorted, twisted, she’s faded away
If only she could see the damage done
Maybe she wouldn’t hate herself everyday.

Sticks and stones can’t break your bones
Her fragile porcelain frame shatters at a touch
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder
Why can’t they see why she hurts so much?

Weigh more, eat less
Weigh less, eat none
Down to zero, in sickness and health
This circle has just begun.

The grave she’s dug for herself
Is much too deep to climb
Six feet under, drowning in lies
Trying to get out, there’s no time.

Her image is wasted, sunken cheeks
Ribs poke out under the brittle skin
A walking skeletal disaster of sorts
While she dies, she can’t win.

Weigh none, eat none
Eat none, die young.
There’s nothing to lose when you’re ugly
Her future has already been hung.

This post was edited by Belldandy on May 13 2008 12:34pm

Did you write this?

this was great

hmm, i liked it, it's well-written.

thnx
first poem I wrote in english hehe

I don't know why but her name was the only one I remembered when I came back to Jsp. Then that random spam thread in the trade forums caught my attention with a little more than coincidence. Ever since then, she became the last good thing about jsp. But now, at least I can justify why I obsess over Belldandy. She's as amazing as me with poems, at least.. almost. Maybe one of these days I'll share a poem too.

This post was edited by Holland on May 14 2008 11:11pm

Remember such love

I remember all the feelings you gave me,
And when I think of you my soul flies free.
Even while my heart aches deeply,
memories of you let me treat others sweetly.

Please stop me from crying,
Help me win this fight.
Whisper to the wind, the water,
The cherry blossoms of the night,
Help me smile awake,
With a joy unsurpassed,
Even if such gentle things,
where never ment to last.

This post was edited by Belldandy on May 18 2008 12:29pm

Her

Proud member of the bagel crew,
Thirteen thousand and four posts made known to you,
Never sober, only drown under a bottle,
Waiting for the pain in her neck- begins to throttle,

Far, far away over the rainbow view,
Puffs of air, places of dreams tinted blue,
Wishing well for the moments to take her there,
Mind made empty, stomach made bare,

Well wishing; envious of fate,
To have, to hold, to love, too late,
A turn of luck caught under surprise,
Left with no room to compromise,

Run, hide, go, seek,
Look, hear, then speak,
Null, void, unheard,
First try, second, then third,

Worst, best, uncharmed,
Still, dreams left unharmed,
Curtain rises, found on stage,
End of chapter, turn the page,

Hinges folds, strings attatched,
Beautiful doll, beauty unmatched,
Free from burden, then perhaps,
Cut her ties, then collapse,

A dream veils over you, dream of bliss,
I awaken you with a kiss,
Millions there, there to vouch,
So please don't keep me on the couch.

Wow holly that's beautifull.

Does that mean I get special treatment tonight?