thanks for opinions fellas
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heres some more.
Puppy (Grandfather)
its comming close to being through the first year
and i dont know how ive made it without you being near
i miss you so much and realize your gone
but i wish we could have sang just one more song
life without you is not the same
i feel as if the family is going insane
they fight and fight with no end in sight
and i wish you were here to make it alright
you seemed to be the one who held the family together
but now that your gone i can only hope things get better
Sadness to Happiness
I miss you so much and dont know what to do
i feel as if life is nothing without you
as time passes by, im sure ill be alright
but for right now ill just cry into the night
cry to myself and keep it concealed
and wonder if in time all will be healed
probably not, the wounds are too deep
i just lay in bed unable to sleep
laying there wondering if ill ever see you again
knowing damn well its all been in vein
losing all that sleep, and crying all those tears
just because of a few fucking fears
but not anymore, no friggen way
ive finally found someone whose willing to stay
you make me so happy and your really a star
you dont really know how special you are
i cant tell you enough how much you mean to me
you make my life so very care free
i could ramble for hours about how special you are
but i hope you understand that your my north star
leading me forward and guiding me far
i wanted you to know that im very happy
and i hope that this poem isnt too sappy
Magen
you are so very special, in so many different ways
i never thought id fall for you in so few days
it seems like only yesterday when you were already taken
and it drove me insane, i knew i wasnt mistaken
from the moment i saw you, i was unable to speak
hiding my true feelings, always looking bleak
but not anymore because your finally mine
and i hope that it will last until the end of time
Her
her hair, her eyes, her nose, and face
always so amazing, like winning first place
her ears, her neck, her shoulders, and arms
such a beautiful girl with lots of good charms
her wrists, her hands, her fingers, and toes
pretty and smart with a light smell of rose
her hips, her thighs, her legs, and her feet
shes the kind of person you definitely want to meet
unnamed
time keeps moving forward, a constant flow
never ending and no where to go
sometimes i wonder when my time will come
by the time i realize it, its already done
im on my last ride, 6 long feet down
i wonder if anyone is hanging around
i look all around, not a single soul in site
i guess i didnt mean much to anyone that night
but it doesnt matter, because the suffering is done
im in my coffin and no longer need to run
why?
why cant you just leave me alone?
instead of trying to make me your drone
i try so hard to keep you and everyone happy
but it seems as if the more i try i just feel even more crappy
all you say is "stop seeing her" and "your stupid"
but why? dont you realize ive been struck by cupid
im finally happy mom and wish you could be for me too
ive found someone whose with me and she seems to be true
your a noose around my neck, a slow painful ache
slowly getting tighter, but my neck just wont seem to break
i used to wish it would, so everything would get better
but now i feel so different cause magen is such a sweet heart
mom you know i love you and i hope you understand
but i refuse to let go of her, i will always hold her hand
and i currently have about 3-4 more in works ;P...
working on my poem
"Fatherless Day"
heres what i got so far...
Fatherless Day
Tomorrow is a day that should be spent with your father
some of you cherish that time and others dont bother
but in cases like mine and im sure there are more
we dont exactly have the option to open dads door
our fathers are gone and there not comming home
there not across the road, down the street, or in rome
they are gone forever and can never come back
no matter how much we cry to ourselves in the pitch black
This post was edited by Rushingservice on Jun 14 2008 03:24pm