This euphoria
It seeps in and makes you high
Each quick burst increases the excitement
Your watching someone dance
You stop
They fall
Watch their body fully drop
You’re a psycho
Living from the excitement of it all
You start
You stop
More fall
Like a puppeteer
You create a show
You really don’t have to stop and let go
Someone else starts
You dance
You fall


I just wrote random things in a plot...anyone want to try to interperet?

i agree with you

it had no flow

ahahahahahaa fucktard you suck die plz your shit sounds like it was written by a fucking cockroach
ahahahaahahaaha rofl random i pk u izi kknpthx?

well this was made in a few minutes for school

but I wanted to maybe make some good poetry, does anybody have some good suggestions on how to improve?

Honestly, Poetry isn't about a specific "flow" nor is it about "rhyming" or "pattern". Poetry is an expression of feelings through words. What I interpreted in your work was...

Between 3 people, Person A is getting high. Person B is telling Person A to stop. As it progresses, Person A is at his/her peak of a buzz, and acts accordingly. Then has his down fall. Person B is still telling person A to stop, While person A is thinking to himself that he/she doesn't really need to stop. Person A finally reaches the low point of the buzz, and that's how it ends.

Basically, In short hand terms... It's about the reaction of getting high... That's my interpretation.

I teach poetry at school.... and I liked your poem....

1. i'd make a few of the lines a bit longer to mix it up the flow

2. More fall------ to me that line didnt work, change that one, or the phrasing

itz trippy

Haha. Yeah Poems dint need to flow most poems are boring.