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Apr 7 2008 08:59pm
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Stars, sky, moon oh my
Fly so high above my head
Oh boy If only I wish I read
A book that never closed or ended
A book that had a certain ring
A ring that stood for a certain thing
That certain thing just may be
The last bit of my sanity

To search, to long
To wish, to Gander

To spy, to fly
To jump that sky

Oh how I wish oh my oh my
I wish that I had hit the sky
To think to learn It’s all great timing
To fail to burn its part of life

Some day ill learn to stay on track
And not lose the one thing I hold dear
That one thing is the single book
That holds my entire life.
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Apr 8 2008 06:04pm
not bad happy.gif
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Apr 8 2008 10:33pm
i'm not a big fan of un-structured poems, but i liked this one. the ending could have flowed a tad bit better, but its pretty good. 7/10
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Apr 10 2008 04:26pm
Not bad.
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Apr 11 2008 12:43pm
it's alright
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