ignore my drunken confessions;
for I will not be held accountable of the honesty that escapes lying lips
and hate me for who I'm not because I gave up looking for who I am;
love me out of pitty and agree with me out of boredom
we must all keep in mind no progress is to be made arguing with fools.

That being said
let me speak words unbled
about thoughts
not yet made plots...

Words shouted wreckless
Should be unbelieved from one so speckless
So before standing glance over the check list
Place half empty faith in scientific descisions
Decided after salting insicions
Yet remember no folly is found in silence
And even less in responding without violence
I believe in standing
Strong in love banding
Complete oposition to branding
Groups unfelled and banded
Opinions salted and unblanded
I proudly take my stance
and in this debate I'll gladly dance
So would you but take my hand
On this dance floor pronounced grand
Lets pray you bought your soap
To end a night with a chance to fornicope
Nothing ends a heated debate
Better than a time to copulate
Then we can light up a fag
and allow lazy lids to sag
Lets mix the red and blue
to a purplish royal hue
Because no progress is made in seperation
and no love in close minded confrontation

That being proclaimed
I cannot be blamed
I bid you all farewell
and wish peace with you dwell.

I'll zip drunken lips
and depart till finding drunken hips.

dont care for it. 3/10

Care to share a reason why?

it doesn't rhyme so it needs to flow. and it doesn't. non rhyming poems often have an "umph" in them that makes them unique, and this one doens't

Not bad. You obviously have the right idea, you are going somewhere with this. But like Kami says it lacks some of the "umph" and flow that it requires.

Everything rhymes except the first stanza.

The rhymes from then on look forced I guess but this is for spoken word poetry and with how I talk the rhyme is natural.

but the syllables are out of wack

nice poem but i see some mistakes in metric nice liric 6/10