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Dec 7 2007 12:11am


Tied up and twisted
shaking on the floor.
Big men in white coats
coming through the door.

Reserpine with orphenadrine,
my psychopathic shot.
Stick me with a needle
boy, that hits the spot.

Numbing and dumbing,
my mind completely froze.
I can't feel my fingers.
I can't feel my toes.

Plug me in with wires,
poke holes in my head,
Electroshock therapy
and tie me to the bed

Beat me, whip me, kick me,
tie me to the wall.
Feed me lots of drugs
so I have no mind at all.

Tied up and twisted
shaking on the floor.
Big men in white coats
coming through the door.


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Dec 7 2007 12:32am
Not bad at all.
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Dec 7 2007 08:31pm
its funny and freaky at the same time

laugh.gif good job!
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Dec 7 2007 10:09pm
Accurately describes ECT. This upsets me.
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Dec 8 2007 10:02pm
Pretty good poem, it flows.
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Dec 11 2007 06:43pm
good poem man keep it up smile.gif
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Dec 14 2007 12:55pm
Quote (dysgenics @ Wed, Dec 12 2007, 12:43am)
good poem man keep it up smile.gif


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Dec 16 2007 12:28pm
really cool poem, i enjoy the reality of it all
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Dec 16 2007 06:44pm
Pretty cool poem.
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